I don't know why I only post poems. Maybe its easier for me to fit in a glimpse of the world into a poem than a prose. Or maybe I just suck at prose, I honestly do. But here another silly creation with lack of structure, as they say. I don't know if any of my works will ever reach past "in revision" stage, but all I can do is hope that one day -- something brilliant will come out.
10/5/10
The yellow leaves,
as if snowflakes falling
they don't care much for dying
they don't care much for flying
they don't care much for me, trying --
to make something out of nothing
to hold on to something
to own anything.
The careless, carefree creations
lifting my mood
leaving me breathless
touching all my senses
and I'm helpless.
Wow! I really like that! Don't worry, I don't any of us ever really think our work is out of the revision stage.
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