Sunday, November 14, 2010

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I don't know why I only post poems. Maybe its easier for me to fit in a glimpse of the world into a poem than a prose. Or maybe I just suck at prose, I honestly do. But here another silly creation with lack of structure, as they say. I don't know if any of my works will ever reach past "in revision" stage, but all I can do is hope that one day -- something brilliant will come out.

10/5/10

The yellow leaves,
as if snowflakes falling
they don't care much for dying
they don't care much for flying
they don't care much for me, trying --

to make something out of nothing
to hold on to something
to own anything.

The careless, carefree creations
lifting my mood
leaving me breathless
touching all my senses
and I'm helpless.

1 comment:

  1. Wow! I really like that! Don't worry, I don't any of us ever really think our work is out of the revision stage.

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